Would you please correct the lyrics of my song?

Would you please assist my music work? I'm writing lyrics in English but I'm just beginning to learn English. Please help correct the English lyrics of my song. There are four sets of lyrics. Please contact me from the email form of my site or myspace's message if you would like to help me. Thank you for reading. I got very kind person who correct. Thank you so much for reading! FC2 Blog Ranking / 人気blogランキング / 音楽ブログ